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Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby, there fore smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, we have accepted
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 fact, smoking not only damaged those who doped,
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 for individuals close by them might be more harmful.
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 smoking should not be allowed in public places.
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 there are arguments on both sides, I tend to agree that a forbid is the most appropriate cause of action. On the one hand, supporters of smoking believe that the benefits from them cannot be ignored.
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 with, since most of these dope has been made strategically, they enable users to delusion better.
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 to say, they can make the wrong decisions in
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 when they face difficult situations.
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, when facing a challenge in
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 these smokers might take a more unsuitable action to overcome the issue.
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, when they are used to consuming and smoking, they can easily harm anybody.
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, in turn, harms society and affects different aspects of their personal
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.
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,
people
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 believe that others are
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 affected by the harms the smokers,
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, there is some person who gets more affected by cigarette they feel omitting. If the number of smokers increases the result is that the number of
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 who do not smoke and are harmed is
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 increasing. To put it difficult the smoker might be severely affected, healthy children.
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,
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 will continue to smoke which is probably harmful to a smoker of different cancers like moth cancers and tongue cancers etc. Which indirectly says
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 not good for everyone.
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, maybe smoking became an integral part of our lives but
people
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 still want smoking should be banned because
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 will affect their bodies and even it will destroy their children's
life
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 if smoking is not banned in public places.

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