Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that
products
containing a lot of sugar have detrimental effects on the human body and cause diseases. Some people
believe that the high price of these products
prevents people
from buying them. I completely disagree with this
opinion and think other regulations should be implemented.
First of all, I believe that society should understand the real threat of consuming manufactured food and drinks. In other words
, the public should realize how these products
affect their body badly; otherwise
, nothing prevents them from eating and drinking these harmful products
, even at high prices. For example
, even poor people
spend a lot of money on unhealthy products
because they don't
become aware of these products
drawbacks. Governments should run some campaigns to inform the public of the negative effects of sugary Change noun form
products'
products
and refer people
who suffer from obesity and high blood pressure because of the consumption of these products
.
Secondly
, this
approach doesn't
consider the wealthy people
who have a significant role in consuming junk food because rich people
spend a considerable amount of money on advertising processed food and drinks, and sometimes they are sponsors of famous brands of drinks and cuisine; therefore
a great number of populations tend to consume unhealthy products
. For instance
, when a normal person sees an advertisement about drinking soda by his favourite role model, he definitely buys that soda apart from
the price.
Change preposition
of
To conclude
, I strongly believe that the higher price of sugary products
can't
prevent the public from using them because they don't
know the disadvantages of these products
, and affluent people
can buy and advertise them.Submitted by Babak.ghassemi.9 on
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