Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that
products
containing a lot of sugar have detrimental effects on the human body and cause diseases. Some
people
believe that the high price of these
products
prevents
people
from buying them. I completely disagree with
this
opinion and think other regulations should be implemented. First of all, I believe that society should understand the real threat of consuming manufactured food and drinks.
In other words
, the public should realize how these
products
affect their body badly;
otherwise
, nothing prevents them from eating and drinking these harmful
products
, even at high prices.
For example
, even poor
people
spend a lot of money on unhealthy
products
because they don'
t
become aware of these
products
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drawbacks. Governments should run some campaigns to inform the public of the negative effects of sugary
products
and refer
people
who suffer from obesity and high blood pressure because of the consumption of these
products
.
Secondly
,
this
approach doesn'
t
consider the wealthy
people
who have a significant role in consuming junk food because rich
people
spend a considerable amount of money on advertising processed food and drinks, and sometimes they are sponsors of famous brands of drinks and cuisine;
therefore
a great number of populations tend to consume unhealthy
products
.
For instance
, when a normal person sees an advertisement about drinking soda by his favourite role model, he definitely buys that soda apart
from
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the price.
To conclude
, I strongly believe that the higher price of sugary
products
can'
t
prevent the public from using them because they don'
t
know the disadvantages of these
products
, and affluent
people
can buy and advertise them.
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