The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the number of voyagers on the Caribbean islands, either who stayed on the ships or on the
island
, annually over a 7-year period.
Overall
, throughout seven years, visitants had been attracted to visit the Caribbean island
as could be seen from the graph that showed a massive increase in the total amount of guests. Although
, there were some moments in a year when the passengers tend to either stay on the cruise or on the island
.
In 2010, visitors would likely go out and stay on the island
rather than live inside the ships, while
in 2006, this
trend shows the opposite way showed
by Change the form of the verb
shown
the
decreasing number of nearly half a million visitantsCorrect article usage
a
,
before it started to rise again in 2007. Meanwhile, the interest of Remove the comma
apply
crowd
staying on the cruise significantly rose until it reached up to 2 million visitors by the end of 2017.
Correct article usage
the crowd
Furthermore
, in 2012, it shows the receding amount of people who hang on inside the cruise as people tend to have some fresh air outside the island
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