Some feel that individuals should try to assimilate completely to the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some individuals argue that those ought to embrace the tradition of the country where they are living.Whilst,others feel that it is crucial to protect their own

culture

.I would argue that assimilation of any nation's beliefs is vitally important

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they should keep alive their native

culture

. On the one hand,it is undeniable that in order to adapt new country and its citizens each immigrant should follow their traditional

activities

such

as attending festivals and celebrating their holidays.

This

is because you show respect to their valuable religion and history,by doing

this

those living abroad may facilitate their adaptation process.

For example

,millions of tourists visit Turkey each year.Some of them are interested in joining in local

activities

in order to celebrate their holidays together and

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the way to get to know new people even a few tourists got married to Turkish men or women.

That is

why the best way

for being

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able to mix with local people is to embrace their traditions.

On the other hand

,everyone must protect their values like cuisine,holidays and so on for the next generation.Traditional

activities

indicate the history and dignity of the nation,

therefore

,those who are living immigrant lives should preserve their national habits,by doing

this

they will have a chance to know where they come from and where they are related

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.It is the sense of belonging

hence

it is much more important than assimilating another

culture

.

For instance

,when the Chechens were exiled to Siberia,they lost their relatives but they found each other only with the help of their historical

activities

,so they united again and came back to their homeland.

To conclude

,it is commonly believed that showing respect and following the country's tradition that you are living is a must,

however

,it does not mean that

this

idea is stronger than protecting national

culture

because of what has been discussed above.