News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays,
TV
and newspapers are continuously showing
pictures
for presenting events and incidents.
On the other hand
, these presentations accompanied clear-cut views of society and its views on public problems. In
this
essay, I will explain my opinion about the subject with a detailed analysis.
Although
, these images stimulate more sensory perception among human
being
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beings
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especially children below 7 years old.
Therefore
, they can get a clear view of historical figures,
environmental
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and environmental
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changes and enhance their interest
on
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in
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new knowledge.
For example
, the
TV
programs like animal kingdom and blue planet
in
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on
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Discovery Channel included many real
pictures
and videos.
For instance
, watching these programs develop children's thinking capacity and creative ability.
Moreover
, in developed
countries
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children rarely know about poverty, scarcity of water and lack of infrastructure facilities .
WHILE
watching
TV
news reports from other poor countries they can know
that
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apply
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how much they are blessed with their present life.
Moreover
, whoever using these
pictures
should follow real and clear images because fake stories make
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the
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darker side than the sunny side.
For
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To
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illustrate
this
during Corona time some of the
TV
channels broadcast death troll of people from different countries and explained those incidents without the help of medical experts.
However
this
news increase anxiety and panic attack towards people especially among senior citizens.
For instance
, seeking clear knowledge and advice from various sectors of human life is inevitable
otherwise
it will
makes
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make
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more vulnerable situations in our society.
To sum up
, our eyes are the most powerful and meaningful tool in our body because of that using
pictures
are more powerful than words but before introducing
it
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them
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mankind should analyze
it
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its
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consequences and they have to think about the present and future assumption of society.
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  • instantaneous comprehension
  • irrefutable evidence
  • transcend language barriers
  • overreliance
  • oversimplification
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