News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Nowadays,

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and newspapers are continuously showing

pictures

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for presenting events and incidents.

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, these presentations accompanied clear-cut views of society and its views on public problems. In

this

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essay, I will explain my opinion about the subject with a detailed analysis.

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, these images stimulate more sensory perception among human

being

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beings

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especially children below 7 years old.

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, they can get a clear view of historical figures,

environmental

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and environmental

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changes and enhance their interest

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new knowledge.

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, the

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programs like animal kingdom and blue planet

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Discovery Channel included many real

pictures

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and videos.

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, watching these programs develop children's thinking capacity and creative ability.

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, in developed

countries

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children rarely know about poverty, scarcity of water and lack of infrastructure facilities .

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watching

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news reports from other poor countries they can know

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apply

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how much they are blessed with their present life.

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, whoever using these

pictures

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should follow real and clear images because fake stories make

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the

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darker side than the sunny side.

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illustrate

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during Corona time some of the

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channels broadcast death troll of people from different countries and explained those incidents without the help of medical experts.

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this

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news increase anxiety and panic attack towards people especially among senior citizens.

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, seeking clear knowledge and advice from various sectors of human life is inevitable

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it will

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more vulnerable situations in our society.

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, our eyes are the most powerful and meaningful tool in our body because of that using

pictures

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are more powerful than words but before introducing

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them

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mankind should analyze

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consequences and they have to think about the present and future assumption of society.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

286 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

empathize
instantaneous comprehension
irrefutable evidence
transcend language barriers
overreliance
oversimplification
misinformation
desensitizing
nuance
in-depth analysis
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