The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram depicts the recycling procedure for
plastic
bottles
. As is observed, the process comprises nine stages, beginning with a person who puts their bottle in the recycle bin and ending with producing products with the materials which are derived from
plastic
bottles
in the recycling process. In the first
stage
, an individual drops a
plastic
bottle into a recycle bin.
Next,
a truck throws the contents of the recycle bin into its container to carry them to the Recycling centre which is where employees of the centre sort the contents and separate the disposable
bottles
. In the fourth
stage
,
plastic
bottles
are compressed into a block. Following the fourth
stage
, in the fifth, the blocks are washed after crushing by two giant rollers.
Next,
plastic
pellets are produced by a shredding machine.
Next,
the pellets are heated up to turn them into fluid and
then
the output fluid is formed into raw material in the following
stage
. In the final
stage
, raw material is used to manufacture products namely
bottles
, pencils,
plastic
bags, T-shirts, and
plastic
food containers.
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