The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.
The maps display changes experienced by a university campus between 2010 and nowadays.
Overall
, the lawn and seating area has been removed in order to expand other buildings,
such
as
student
facilities or
student
accommodations. Currently, science and art buildings are separated by a road,
while
in the past, both were grouped in the same building. Moving in a clockwise direction from the art building, it can be seen that two shops have been replaced by a higher
student
building. Next to
this
one, a road has been constructed,
while
a restaurant has been demolished. At the corner of the two streets,
student
accommodation has been changed by an enormous building where are located the
student
facilities, shops and offices were placed in other locations in 2010. The
student
accommodation that was located in
this
area was moved across the road, next to another
student
accommodation, increasing its height of it at the same time. In the centre of the map, an area for seating and the lawn were demolished, maintaining only the lake in the centre of the campus.
Finally
, it is
also
worth pointing out how all buildings are higher nowadays than previously in 2010.
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