Some people think that we are becoming independent of each other while other people say that we are becoming more dependent on each other. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Humans are social animals and throughout their

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they require the support of other beings in one form or the other. Certain groups of

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argue that in the contemporary era, inter-dependency has increased,

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, others believe that it has gone down.

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essay intends to analyze both perspectives. I personally believe that our dependence has risen. The main argument given by those who say that

people

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are becoming more independent is based on an increased number of individuals choosing to live alone. In recent times, it has been observed that the youth prefer to move out of their parent’s home and start living their life on their own terms,

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giving them a sense of autonomy.

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, with the advent of technology,

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now have the option to even get emotional support and a feeling of companionship, which is evident from the rising popularity of AI chatbots and AI girlfriends in East Asian countries like China and Japan. In direct contrast to

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though, it is said that dependency has grown on

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outside one’s family. In today’s life of hustle and bustle, nuclear families with both parents earning a livelihood have become common.

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, they require external help to manage the time-consuming household chores like cleaning and washing. A recent survey reported that in major tech hubs of

India

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there is a shortage of good, reliable housemaids.

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, even hiring nannies or use of day-care services to help look after the children has become essential for these working couples.

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, I reiterate my opinion that

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are becoming more dependent on others, only the basis of those relationships has changed.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

273 words

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Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

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