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In many parts of the world, it is common for one parent to stay at home and raise a new born child while other works full time to earn money. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, a trend is going on that
one
 parent has to live at their home in order to take care of their child despite going to work , which I think is a positive development for both
parents
 and their child and its advantages are more rather than its disadvantages.
To begin
 with the advantages, first of all, in starting days of childhood, children do a lot of mistakes at their low maturity level , which can be dangerous for their life ,so
one
person
 should always be with them to stop from doing mistakes and guide them to about their taking decisions. which they usually take before doing any work.
For instance
, in 2020 in Punjab three old babies slipped into a water tank and got because no
one
 was at home to talk care of them,
as a result
, his
parents
 had to get disappointment.
Secondly
,
one
person
 plays a role of a supportive
person
 who always creates fun in his life and helps in difficult time
otherwise
 he can feel alone which can cause mental disorder, so,
one
 parent save children from these kinds of flaws. On the other side, it is commonly seen that in
this
 era of inflation,
one
 can not survive without money as far as
one
 can not
also
 afford the expenditure of others,
consequently
 ,
this
 step can create affect the income of a
person
 .
Besides
this
, children can be independent.
This
 is because their
parents
 always take their decisions and they do give not them the to do work independently. To recapitulate,
although
, money issues can be created for
parents
 I think the saving life of a child will cover all flaws.
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