The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature.  

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the statistics of crime occurrences reported to police in Johnstown city quarterly in the year 2016
while
the graph represents the average temperature each month in the same year in Celcius degrees. As an
overall
trend, it can be seen that traffic violations became the largest amount in police
reports
sum compared to noise complaints and theft
reports
. That year, the average temperature fluctuated from the beginning of 2016. During the first quarter, the statistic of traffic transgressions hits a peak at around 180
reports
and declined moderately until September before it climbed a bit. The second largest report figure was theft occurrences which started in January with around 20
reports
and increased rapidly. It peaked during the third quarter at about seven times the initial figure and fell between October and December.
Whereas
the
reports
in noise complaints saw almost stable with a little rise in the second quarter. It is interesting to observe that the highest sum of theft
reports
is mostly affected by the warmest season, which was at 24 Celcius degrees. Another trend saw the coolest month correlated positively with traffic violation occurrences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words reports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • data representation
  • crime rate
  • monthly variations
  • correlation
  • theft
  • vandalism
  • assault
  • seasonal trends
  • temperature fluctuations
  • peak
  • decline
  • law enforcement
  • civil disorder
  • statistical analysis
  • public safety
  • climatic influence
  • incidence rate
  • aggregate data
  • preventative measures
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