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Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their homes for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons

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Nowadays, people can choose to
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 away from offices.
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this
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 choice has some negative impacts, I would argue it has more positive influences. On the
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 hand, I accept that there are some disadvantages of remote working. For
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 thing, some employees lack self-discipline. When working in an environment full of distractions, like a cafe, or an overcrowded home, they are likely to have difficulty focusing on their tasks. For another thing, problems like a poor Internet connection or device issues can easily put remote
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 out of
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 and no
one
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 can tell how long it can take for them to resume
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. An extreme instance would be remote
workers
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 who choose to live in a remote and underdeveloped country where fundamental infrastructures do not
work
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 reliably. When
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 issues occur, it may take
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 month or more for
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 person to get in contact with the corporation again.
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, they are less available than on-site staff members. Despite these negative influences discussed above, I would argue that
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 choice benefits both
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 and organizations. From employees' perspective,
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 choice saves them the exhausting trips to and from workplaces,
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 they would be more energetic when devoted to
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 and
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work
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 more efficiently. In terms of companies, they save the cost of buying or renting a workplace, which is always a big sum of money, especially in big cities. In
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 way, they could invest more money in key fields of their businesses to guarantee their success. In conclusion, there are some drawbacks
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 working from home,
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, it brings far more benefits to both
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 and companies.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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