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Many people use written language in a less formal way and in a relaxed way than in the past. Why is that so? Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

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There is no doubt that written
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by
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 an enormous number of non-formal
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 some
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 of using
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 would bring extremely terrible consequences, there are those who fervently believe that
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 formally and the dark side of the discussion topic. It is understandable why some
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 deem less-formally written
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 and think that it is quick and in good order and fast-page society. The key rationale is that abbreviated
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 are likely to save
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 on keyboard manipulation and reduce the seriousness of the sentence on the message they send. Novelty and practicality,
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, seem to be fervently
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received
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.
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,
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 thinking is short-sighted, as
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 of relaxed
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 relaxation for readers and release the stressful atmosphere in the chat. A long sentence can be shortened into 3 or 4
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, and abbreviated
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 are spawned to make
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’s chatting progress more convenient and faster.
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 in modern days.
On the other hand
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, there is an agreement among those who oppose the trend that results in greater drawbacks. Only the young are more likely to understand the short form of
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 than the elderly because they are used to the trend.
As a result
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, many
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 will be trapped in a pile of abbreviated
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 or phrases and
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 to find the meanings of others’ messages to themselves.
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, the immediate result and the most worth-worried reality would obviously be the loss of culture,
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 future and it is our fear in preserving our culture and national identity through
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. Taking everything into account,
people
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 use written
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 more casually
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 message condensing and the desire to fit in with a particular group.
This
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 send more lovely and easier for them to make friends, but it
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 to many unexpected confusions.
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, it appears that the drawbacks exceed the advantages.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informality
  • digital communication
  • texting
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • generational shifts
  • brevity
  • personal expression
  • language standards
  • erosion
  • interlocutors
  • emojis
  • internet slang
  • academic contexts
  • language learning
  • misunderstandings
  • language teaching
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