The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
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The two presented maps describe the changes that took place at a
city
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hospital from 2007 to 2010. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the largest changes involved transportation, including additional public parking, the construction of a nearby bus station and new roundabouts. The majority of the hospital underwent very little change. The roads (Ring,
City
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, and Hospital
road
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) all remained largely the same, though two small lanes were built off of hospital
road
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to link up with the new bus station and roundabouts on either end of Hospital
road
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(where it bisects with Ring and
City
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road
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) were added. The
city
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hospital building itself was unaltered. The changes were mainly around the hospital and the largest of these was related to parking. In 2007, there was a small parking lot along Hospital
road
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for both staff and the public. By 2010 they had decided to separate the public and staff parking by adding an exclusively public parking area running along the east side of the
city
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hospital.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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