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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations while others think it is waste of money. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion.

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In the modern world, it has been a trend to do grand celebrations of all
events
, which is an ongoing debate
that
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about that
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 is it really worth
to spend
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spending
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money
 on all those
events
. Some people say that it is necessary
while
 others disagree
to
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 it. It is not a good idea to spend too much
money
 on family functions as far as my opinion is concerned. Talking about the proportion, who think it is valid to spend
money
 on
such
events
, their thinking criteria is based on status symbol, cultural norms and
sense
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 of competition just by looking at others. These people believe in
show
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showing
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 off that they have
tones
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tons
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 of
moneyby
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money by
 organising grand
events
.
Also
, in some cultures there are trends to spend way too much
money
 on all important
events
, it does
not
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no
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 matter whether they can afford it or not. They just do it for
the
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society
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 pressure.
Further
, another factor comes
of
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from
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 peer pressure, because they even take loans just to celebrate their
events
 on large scale.
On the other hand
, people who think
to cut
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 their coat
according to
 their cloth,
which
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means they spend
money
 wisely on any occasion. For them, organising family functions on large scale is a waste of resources like time and
money
.
Furthermore
, it is absurd to spend 10 years of savings on just one day.
For instance
, in India, all the fathers spend all their savings on their daughter's wedding, it could be in terms of dowry or grand celebration, which is
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absurdity
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.
To conclude
, I would say, we should think about
our
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ourselves
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 before we spend
money
 as
spendthrift
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spendthrifts
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 cannot have certainty in future.
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