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People

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are beginning to realize that

science

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and

technology

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have deeply affected our daily life. I very much agree with

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statement. With the development of modern

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and

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people

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generally use high

technology

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, and modern

technology

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gradually affects

people

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's lives. If there is no TV, the new policy issued by the government will not be able to spread to thousands of households. If there is no computer,

people

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who travel and study will not be able to video chat with their families. If there is no modern

technology

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people

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's living standards will not be greatly improved. Maybe now we are still living in a period of information closure. With the rapid development of

science

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and

technology

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, especially computer network

technology

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and electronic information

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, expensive luxury goods

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as mobile phones and

computers

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have entered the homes of ordinary

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and become the necessities of our lives. Just imagine, if there is no mobile phone, how we can keep in touch with our relatives as we like; if there is no Internet, how can we chat with friends far away in foreign countries; if there is no high-definition television

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, how can we enjoy the gorgeous Hollywood Movie?

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we must admit that

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and

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have

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changed our way of life and our culture to a certain extent.

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However

, modern

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also

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brings

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to the environment and human beings. Recently,

people

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have become rich, and the road is too far to be bothered to walk, so they use cars

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of feet. But the

harm

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caused by cars is far more than we imagined.

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the exhaust fumes from automobiles may not look like much, they pollute a

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, hundreds of millions of

people

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all over the world buy cars, and some

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even buy several, so the

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caused by them is immeasurable.

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, the sky is not as blue as before, and the whole world is starting to warm up.

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are

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harmful to human beings,

although

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computers

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can enable us to acquire a

lot

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of new knowledge and know some things that we never knew before. But because of

computers

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, many

people

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have become nerds and nerds. The radiation emitted by

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cannot be ignored. Every year, many children put on glasses because they spend too much time playing with

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. The distance between

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becomes

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. In my opinion,

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has brought us a

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of convenience in our lives, but it has

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caused a

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harm

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Technology

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should be used to help

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, not persecute

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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432 words

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technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter – introduce yourself – explain the situation – say what action you would like to company to take.

-It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some museum charge entry fees while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging an entry fee outweight the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.