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Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problems does this cause and what are the Solutions?

#people #employment
In
this
 era that we are living
,
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younger
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the younger
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 generation
seek
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for
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golden opportunities in the business market which could lead to the competition between
young
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the young
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 and old generation
that
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 could cause a few problems. One of the main issues which could occur is that when managers want to hire
new
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 workforce, they have to choose between experienced
workers
 and young
workers
. On
this
 account, it is a hard decision to make as both groups could be as qualified as each other for
this
 vacancy. To illustrate, on one hand, the manager can use the experience of older
workers
 and
on the other hand
, youngsters are
the
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stimulant to the
job
 because they are more active and they could get things done faster.
Therefore
, choosing between these two groups can be a problem and mischoosing could
contributes
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 to
the
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disappointment for each employee and
it
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could
leads
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 to putting them in
wrong
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 place.
Also
,
this
 can put
on
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the obstacle
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obstacle
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 in the work process.
Hence
, employers have to pick out among oldsters and youngsters that could make stiff conditions in that business. To solve
this
 problem, employers have to categorize their priorities for hiring new
workers
 to make the right decision for each position.
Firstly
, they have to put in order the quality of each workforce
.
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For instance
, for
high rank
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jobs
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 they have to consider the work experience element as it is very important and for
low
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job
positions
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 managers might look into the best quality of each volunteer.
This
 could give a chance to younger ones and in some cases,
boss
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 could ignore their background. Eventually, making the right decision is an important task that every employer
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 to manage. In conclusion, putting every individual in the correct
job
 position can avoid serious problems in the
job
 market.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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