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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case, Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?

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Long hours of screen time
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 a major
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 regardless of age.
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 are the most vulnerable to
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problems
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 because lack of self-awareness and self-control. In
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 essay, I will explain why parents and schools should cooperate in reminding and regulating cell phone usage when it comes to
children
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. There are many positive reasons why
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 should have access to
smartphones
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.
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. If
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 can use their cell phones to study and interact with their friends,
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 they could get high grades at
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 and keep up to date with
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 announcements. A report conducted at Marry primary
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 reveals that when
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 use their personal phones to study and interact with their friends,
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 results in
children
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 getting high marks on test day.
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 shows that if
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 utilize their
smartphone
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 to study, their
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 grades will rise up.
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, using
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health
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problems
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. If
children
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 spend many hours a day using their
smartphones
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, they can cause damage to their eyes and gain weight since they are not exercising to keep blood flowing in their bodies. A number of families reported that their
children
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 have eyesight
problems
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 because of their excessive usage of
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.
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, I firmly believe that not only parents are responsible for their
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's
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 but
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 schools should remind
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 of the
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 complications of phone usage. If both parents and schools regulate screen time,
children
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 can enjoy learning in a much healthier way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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