The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
graph
and table present the approximatively
monthly temperatures and the Change the word
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number
of hours
of sun was
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London
, New York
, and Sydney.
Overall
, in
the Change preposition
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graph
is shown that the
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York
has the highest number
of hours
of sunshine in July. While
,
in the table is seen that Remove the comma
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in
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York
has the biggest total annual hours
of sun.
To begin
with, the graph
illustrates the increased
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of
the Change preposition
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hours
of sunshine in New York
about 30 hours
, which is the biggest number
in the graph
through
other cities. Change preposition
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By contrast
, the lowest number
of hours
of daylight in New York
was in
January, 4 respectively. In Change the preposition
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London
the most daytime was in July, over 23 Add a comma
,London
hours
, which is the same bright month as for
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York
. As well as
for New York
, London
has the least number
of hours
of daylight in January, above 5 hours
. On the other hand
, in Sydney
the most sunshine period was in January, under 30 Add a comma
,Sydney
hours
, and the lowest Add a missing verb
was in
in
July, 15 Change the preposition
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approximatively
.
The table Replace the word
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depict
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York
has the greatest number
of hours
of sun
making up 2 535 Add an article
the sun
hours
per year. The second city is Sydney with 2473 hours
and the lowest number
has London
, with 1180 hours
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