The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph below illustrates the figure of stores that closed and the stores that open newly during the
years
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2011 to 2018 in one country.
Overall
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, the graph despite that the
number
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of open and closed
shops
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went down over the
years
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. At
first,
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new
shops
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opening in 2011 reached a peak of 8500, compared to
shops
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which closed in the same year.
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, there was a sharp decline in the
number
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of new
shops
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in 2012 where reaching less than the previous year. the closures of stores show a fluctuation in the next
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until it plunged significantly in 2015.
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the new
shops
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' figure started to increase slowly until it met the same
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of closed
shops
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in 2014 with almost 6200.
In addition
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, the total of opened
shops
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shoot up to a greater
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than closed
shops
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with 5100 open
shops
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and 4000 closed
shops
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In 2016.
However
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, the opening
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shops
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of shops
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stayed stable in the next
years
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, number, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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