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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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A few learners have to work
while
 throughout the education era.
Therefore
,
this
 is cause a study deficit and frequently feels under stress. Particularly,
this
 problem reveals in poor families. In the past decade, a universities tuition fee was affordable. They were able to cover utilities
such
 as flat rent, gas bills and social activities by scholarship.
Furthermore
, it was handy to save money for their future career and residential needs. Nowadays, It is super challenging to cover thorough utilities
due to
 the high demand for
a rental houses
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rental houses
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 and the high inflation effect. In terms of causes learners considering to complete education life without requesting money from their families.
Moreover
, they are tackling exams and rushing the workplace simultaneously. It is very harmful to their psychology and physiology.
Nevertheless
, In my opinion,that can be preventable by volunteers or the government. The competition may organize for candidates who are willing to obtain an additional scholarship from a private organization.
For instance
, In my home country rivals extensive and comprehensive
such
 as math,chemistry and history to grade their intelligence and knowledge. The detection of talented people would be beneficial for their nation in the future.
On the other hand
, When I was in university, I attended work and travel elections in order to save money for
further
 school periods. Indeed, I won and flew to the United States.
This
 program was very beneficial for me.
For example
, when I was in States I earned a dollar currency which is very valuable than my local currency and recognize American culture. It was sufficient to cover my whole expenses during my school period. In conclusion, some students have to work
while
 their education era.
However
, the private organization, government and wealthy people's collaboration may be overcome in terms of these incidents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial necessity
  • Tuition
  • Living costs
  • Employability
  • Work experience
  • Under pressure
  • Mismanagement
  • Time-management
  • Academic pursuits
  • Flexible part-time study
  • Financial aid
  • Scholarships
  • Bursaries
  • Collaboration
  • Integrated programs
  • Education
  • Work-life balance
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