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Media surround us,from the shows we watch on tv to the music we listen on the radio. How does media affect the society? Do you agree that the media has more disadvantages than benefits?

#media #tv #music #radio #society
The
media
 is
such
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whether it is a positive development or
by contrast
 the negative one.needless to say,the
media
 has made our life more convenient and easier.
To begin
 with,the
media
 is claimed to be one of the greatest inventions.
However
,having said that,many people hold the view that it has gone too far.
That is
 to say,it contains
many
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 disturbing information and programs that are not completely appropriate for people
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 any
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.The reason why is that ,nowadays people would do anything in exchange
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 fame.They have lost boundaries in order to carry out the most dramatic programs or Tv shows.
Therfore
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,
as a
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 it has an extremely bad influence on our lives.
On the other hand
,if we have a high level of awareness and responsibility,it would be so beneficial to our lives.To be more specific ,the
media
 enables us to take control of our learning scheme by watching scientific programs or listening to
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 podcasts to boost our brain and mental health as well.
Furthermore
,it helps us to broaden our horizons about different cultures.I mean you can watch documentaries on streaming networks about
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 variety of countries in order to learn and gain information about their way of life and culture. In conclusion,the
media
 is a big pull factor
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 our today's life.It is clearly a double edge sword,but
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 benefits overtook its disadvantages
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