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Some young people like to copy the behavior and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?

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In recent times, more and more
people
 are trying to imitate others in different ways. The youth,
in particular
, have more tendency toward shaping their character and
also
 wearing the same clothes as well-known
people
. The reasons and the drawbacks
this
 might bring will be discussed in the following essay. In terms of reasons, there are too many, but only two will be pointed out in
this
 paragraph. First of all, since celebrities,
such
 as Hollywood actors or a singer are in the spotlight among these
people
, they consider them as their
role
 models both with regard to their character or the way they dress.
Moreover
, not only do famous
people
 are their
role
 models, but they can
also
 endorse different products, clothes
for instance
;
this
 means the young will do their best to buy the purchase which was endorsed by their favourite celebrities. When it comes to the drawbacks, the behavioural characteristics of young
people
 will be negatively affected. During
this
 life period, the youth
,
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plays a major
role
 in their behavioural pattern,
therefore
, they might end up following an anti-social or mentally unstable person, which, in turn, will have a detrimental impact on their lives. Take a teenage boy favouring an artist who is suffering from bipolar disorder, he will probably form his attitude and
also
 clothing habits based on a person who has various mood swings even during a single day.
As a result
, he can act as weird as his artist In his life.
To sum up
, the matter of imitating
people
's attitudes and wearing habits is deeply rooted in some
people
's characters;
that is
 because finding a
role
 model and following their life habits are what they seek; herein, some issues like mental dysfunction
this
 will bring.
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