the diagram below shows the manufacturing process of making sugar from sugar cane. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing carbohydrates from sugarcane.
Foremost, the following procedure consists of seven steps of various time duration. Starting with farming and ending with dry sugar.
Firstly
, sugar cane is farmed and nourished for a period of 12 to 18 months. Which is the longest time to take a step in the entire action. Linking Words
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, the harvested glucose goes through the step of squashing. Through ,Linking Words
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we can get a fluid called juice.
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Furthermore
, the next process is of purifying the acquired juice from the limestone strainer. Linking Words
Moreover
, the filtered juice is put under extreme heat to allow it to evaporate to get syrup out of it. After that syrup is centrifuged to detach the crystals. Once that happened the carbohydrate is taken into the final phase of drying and cooling. Linking Words
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finalises the activity and the sugar is produced which is now ready to use.Linking Words
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