Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?
With the advancements in science and
technology
around the globe in the twenty-first century, scientifically and technologically skilled personnel are gaining ground. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, on the flip side, various Linking Words
artists
and performers of music are Use synonyms
loosing
popularity day by day. Replace the word
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essay will partially agree with the statement.
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To begin
with, researchers and innovators have played a monumental role in developing modern modes of transport. Masses mostly value those Linking Words
people
who bring comfort to their lives; Use synonyms
technology
experts have contributed a lot in Use synonyms
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respect. Owing to their significant efforts, Linking Words
people
can now travel that distance in minutes and hours which would have taken days, weeks or even months in the past. Use synonyms
Moreover
, technologists have been able to develop those applications which have eased communication to a great extent. Linking Words
For instance
, social media applications like WhatsApp, Facebook, and Instagram have made sending and receiving messages in the snap of fingers, a reality. Linking Words
Therefore
, scientists seem to be more valued than Linking Words
artists
.
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On the contrary
, Linking Words
artists
' worth is not diminishing, even in Use synonyms
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contemporary world heavily influenced by modern Linking Words
technology
. As everyone on Use synonyms
this
planet seeks happiness and peace, art and music are great sources of joy and mental satisfaction. We, as humans, admire those Linking Words
people
who make us happy and lively. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, music, drawings, paintings and sculptures stimulate those hormones which Linking Words
soothes
the human body. These sources of art indeed ply a great relief from tiresome drudgery. Change the verb form
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Hence
, musicians and Linking Words
artists
hold great value in the lives of Use synonyms
people
.
In a nutshell, scientistsUse synonyms
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, as well as artists,
as well as
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artists
are valued in a modern community. They both have earned fame through their hard work and talent. Use synonyms
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, scientists and Linking Words
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