Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

With the advancements in science and

technology

around the globe in the twenty-first century, scientifically and technologically skilled personnel are gaining ground.

Nevertheless

, on the flip side, various

artists

and performers of music are

loosing

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popularity day by day.

This

essay will partially agree with the statement.

To begin

with, researchers and innovators have played a monumental role in developing modern modes of transport. Masses mostly value those

people

who bring comfort to their lives;

technology

experts have contributed a lot in

this

respect. Owing to their significant efforts,

people

can now travel that distance in minutes and hours which would have taken days, weeks or even months in the past.

Moreover

, technologists have been able to develop those applications which have eased communication to a great extent.

For instance

, social media applications like WhatsApp, Facebook, and Instagram have made sending and receiving messages in the snap of fingers, a reality.

Therefore

, scientists seem to be more valued than

artists

.

On the contrary

,

artists

' worth is not diminishing, even in

this

contemporary world heavily influenced by modern

technology

. As everyone on

this

planet seeks happiness and peace, art and music are great sources of joy and mental satisfaction. We, as humans, admire those

people

who make us happy and lively.

Furthermore

, music, drawings, paintings and sculptures stimulate those hormones which

soothes

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the human body. These sources of art indeed ply a great relief from tiresome drudgery.

Hence

, musicians and

artists

hold great value in the lives of

people

. In a nutshell, scientists

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as well as

artists

are valued in a modern community. They both have earned fame through their hard work and talent.

However

, scientists and

technology

experts seem to enjoy more significance in the lives of

people

, but that does not subdue the worth of

artists

and musicians.