You have recently attended a job interview and have been offered the job. Write a letter to the company accepting the job offer, and provide details about when you will be able to start and any other information you think they may need.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Damien Salmon
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recently attended an interview for the position of senior accountant on the 25th of October 2024. I would like to thank you for considering me as a candidate for
this
position. I am writing to let you know that I have thoroughly thought through and have made my final decision to accept the job offer. Let me provide more details regarding the timeline that I am expecting to start in that position. Currently, I am employed at my previous company until the 15th of November even though I submitted my resignation 6 weeks ago.
However
, a meeting with a few investors was pre-planned at my company and my manager expects me to be there which is on the 13th of October which is unavoidable I apologize for the delay. Could you please let me know the time I should be present at the office and my dress code
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In addition
, I will forward the requested documents
such
as my social insurance number, identity verification documents and void cheque to set up the agreement and payroll. Thanks again for your kind consideration and please don't hesitate to contact me if you need
further
information. Sincerely Yours, Damien
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Ensure to clarify dates to avoid confusion, such as the mentioned '13th of October', probably meant November.
coherence cohesion
Use more linking words to enhance the flow between paragraphs.
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The letter clearly addresses the acceptance of the job offer along with providing a reasonable start date and necessary follow-up actions.
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The letter maintains a professional and respectful tone throughout, suitable for business correspondence.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph presents a single, clear idea which contributes to the overall structure.
coherence cohesion
The use of greeting and closing phrases is appropriately polite and formal for the occasion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • acceptance
  • position offered
  • start date
  • flexibility
  • documentation
  • enthusiasm
  • commitments
  • contribute
  • team
  • offer letter
  • employment contract
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