You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam, I Miss Anokhi Desai, am writing
this
letter to you, to express my interest in the seminar
that is
being held in India. I read about the seminar on the notice board of the office and am looking forward to
participate
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in the same. It could be really helpful if you provide me with some information so that I can plan
accordingly
. Can you please share the dates on which the seminar would be conducted so that I can plan for my visa and travel
.
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I would
also
like to know the schedule which would help me to select the travel timings.
Also
, if you could let me know if there is any accommodation provided by you for an extra cost. If not, can you provide me with all the possible options for accommodation and their costs respectively
.
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Having all these details would help me plan my travel in the best possible way. Request you to provide the above details at
the
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earliest. Yours Faithfully, Anokhi Desai
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  • moreover
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  • therefore
  • however
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