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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?

#threat #weapons #world #peace #power #energy #technology
Nuclear
power
 is an innovation for modern science and on the other side is the key source of
nuclear
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weapon
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. Nuclear technology can be used for our benefit as
the
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 alternative to fuel, electricity, and other types of
energy
. Meanwhile, nuclear
power
 can be used as the ultimate weapon for
the
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several countries to threaten our existence and potentially can destroy the
world
. I disagree that nuclear weapons can maintain
the
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world
peace
 but I do agree with the idea that nuclear
power
 can be a huge benefit for cheaper
energy
. Several countries have achieved nuclear
power
 and become stronger with
this
power
. Many
people
 said that nuclear weapons can preserve
world
peace
,
however
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 many
people
 did not agree with
this
 idea. In the current
situation
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 there
are
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 a lot of
difference
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power
 that can
threat
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 the humanities like terrorism and genocide and
people
 will not care
for
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about
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 what
happen
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 with
nuclear
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a nuclear
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 weapon. Anger, domination, and
power
 cannot keep the
peace
 in the
world
. There are several ways that can resolve the
peace
 in the
world
. Nuclear
power
 can be chosen as an alternative and claimed as the most efficient source of
energy
 during these days of
the
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energy
 crisis. Unlike petroleum or gas,
this
power
 is highly effective for transportation,
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and industrial
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industrial
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industry
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 and
mostly
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is mostly
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 pollution free, With
this
power
 claimed limitless.
However
, there is
great
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 responsibility with
this
power
. Only a few countries can manage
this
power
 to use in daily activities. Nuclear
power
 needs very careful handling and may affect the lives of
people
 with the radioactive effect if not handled carefully.
To conclude
, nuclear
power
 can be used for our benefit and
potentially
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 to dominate or destroy the
world
.
This
 depends on our thinking and ideology to use
this
power
. Ben Parker from Spiderman said with great
power
 comes great responsibility. We must use
this
power
 to improve our
world
 and become better, not to threaten or dominate others.
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