The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?

Nuclear

power

is an innovation for modern science and on the other side is the key source of

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weapon

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. Nuclear technology can be used for our benefit as

the

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alternative to fuel, electricity, and other types of

energy

. Meanwhile, nuclear

power

can be used as the ultimate weapon for

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several countries to threaten our existence and potentially can destroy the

world

. I disagree that nuclear weapons can maintain

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world

peace

but I do agree with the idea that nuclear

power

can be a huge benefit for cheaper

energy

. Several countries have achieved nuclear

power

and become stronger with

this

power

. Many

people

said that nuclear weapons can preserve

world

peace

,

however

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many

people

did not agree with

this

idea. In the current

situation

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there

are

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a lot of

difference

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power

that can

threat

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the humanities like terrorism and genocide and

people

will not care

for

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what

happen

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with

nuclear

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weapon. Anger, domination, and

power

cannot keep the

peace

in the

world

. There are several ways that can resolve the

peace

in the

world

. Nuclear

power

can be chosen as an alternative and claimed as the most efficient source of

energy

during these days of

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energy

crisis. Unlike petroleum or gas,

this

power

is highly effective for transportation,

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industrial

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and

mostly

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pollution free, With

this

power

claimed limitless.

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, there is

great

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responsibility with

this

power

. Only a few countries can manage

this

power

to use in daily activities. Nuclear

power

needs very careful handling and may affect the lives of

people

with the radioactive effect if not handled carefully.

To conclude

, nuclear

power

can be used for our benefit and

potentially

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to dominate or destroy the

world

.

This

depends on our thinking and ideology to use

this

power

. Ben Parker from Spiderman said with great

power

comes great responsibility. We must use

this

power

to improve our

world

and become better, not to threaten or dominate others.