Write about the following topic. Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the current situation, the graph of

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abortion picked up a spike and becomes a controversial subject. A part of the community

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that surgery to drop a baby should be legalized,

however

, others have a completely opposite view. In my opinion, I agree that

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abortion should be legalized to record

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medical history and

documentation

. But, I

also

believe that it should be kept secret and restricted. On the one hand, Legal

documentation

of any medical treatment is very important and should be recorded.

Furthermore

, medical

staffs

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can easily track a

humans

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health background

as well as

treat them

accordingly

, it can save one's life

incase

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in case

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of a real medical emergency.

Moreover

, it can

also

save

female

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the female

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child

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children

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when people

with

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male dominated

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male-dominated

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society opt to abort them.

For example

, the initiative by

Indian

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government to stop telling parents about the gender of a

child

before birth helped save

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child

.

On the other hand

, there are some cases when females are not comfortable

to share

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the details and want to keep it secret.

Firstly

, when the female doesn't want to share the news with

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society as sometimes it can be really difficult to explain the situation.

Secondly

, when the mother isn't ready for the marriage and doesn't want to settle with the father of the

child

to avoid legal

documentation

.

To conclude

,

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supportive legal

documentation

and medical background

is

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extremely important to avoid any medical mistake in future. The health history should be kept restricted and accessed by the family doctor for the

patient

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benefit.