Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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abortion picked up a spike and becomes a controversial subject. A part of the community

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that surgery to drop a baby should be legalized,

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, others have a completely opposite view. In my opinion, I agree that

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abortion should be legalized to record

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medical history and

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believe that it should be kept secret and restricted. On the one hand, Legal

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of any medical treatment is very important and should be recorded.

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, medical

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can easily track a

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health background

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treat them

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, it can save one's life

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of a real medical emergency.

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, it can

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save

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when people

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male dominated

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society opt to abort them.

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, the initiative by

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government to stop telling parents about the gender of a

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before birth helped save

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, there are some cases when females are not comfortable

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the details and want to keep it secret.

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, when the female doesn't want to share the news with

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society as sometimes it can be really difficult to explain the situation.

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, when the mother isn't ready for the marriage and doesn't want to settle with the father of the

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to avoid legal

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supportive legal

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and medical background

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extremely important to avoid any medical mistake in future. The health history should be kept restricted and accessed by the family doctor for the

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benefit.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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261 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Bodily autonomy
Women’s rights
Health risks
Socio-economic challenges
Ethical duty
Illegal abortions
Moral and ethical considerations
Fetus's right to life
Psychological consequences
Emotional consequences
Societal impact
Time limitations
Mandatory counseling
Legal status
Abortion rates
Women's health
Anecdotal evidence
Human element

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