Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

We often observe

children

watching their phones when they are walking on the street. They spend several hours per day on their iPhones.

This

essay will discuss the cause of

children

frequently using their

smartphones

, and I think it will lead to side effects on

children

’s development. First of all, the

smartphone

, developed by Apple or Samsung, we use today have a

varied

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of functions,

such

as searching

internet

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the internet

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, playing

a

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video games and reading ebooks.

Children

are attracted to playing video games because it is sophisticated development on a

smartphone

nowadays. The game contains a high-resolution video and a rich storyline.

Children

satisfy with

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climax of the game feature.

Therefore

,

children

keep playing the game on their

smartphones

.

Moreover

, the function of

smartphones

is varied, which makes

children

do more things than past,

such

as reading an ebook and searching for videos on Youtube in a

smartphone

. Some

children

are eager to learn by searching the reference on the

internet

when they do their homework. Knowledge,

such

as science and language, can be easily obtained from

internet

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the internet

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.

Children

are kept to find what they want on the

internet

by using the phone to fulfil their desire to learn. In conclusion, I think overusing

smartphones

at a young age would lead to an adverse effect on development,

such

as social skills and cause hazards to the eye by flashlights on

smartphone

screens.

For example

,

children

concentrating on their

smartphones

could lead to ignoring their surroundings. If their parent or friend finds them, they will be focusings on their phone without eye contact.

Furthermore

, car accidents would happen if they are watching their phone

while

they are crossing the road.