Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

We often observe

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watching their phones when they are walking on the street. They spend several hours per day on their iPhones.

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frequently using their

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, and I think it will lead to side effects on

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’s development. First of all, the

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, developed by Apple or Samsung, we use today have a

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of functions,

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as searching

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, playing

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video games and reading ebooks.

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are attracted to playing video games because it is sophisticated development on a

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nowadays. The game contains a high-resolution video and a rich storyline.

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satisfy with

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climax of the game feature.

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,

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keep playing the game on their

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.

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, the function of

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is varied, which makes

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do more things than past,

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as reading an ebook and searching for videos on Youtube in a

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. Some

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are eager to learn by searching the reference on the

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when they do their homework. Knowledge,

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as science and language, can be easily obtained from

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are kept to find what they want on the

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by using the phone to fulfil their desire to learn. In conclusion, I think overusing

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at a young age would lead to an adverse effect on development,

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as social skills and cause hazards to the eye by flashlights on

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screens.

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,

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concentrating on their

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could lead to ignoring their surroundings. If their parent or friend finds them, they will be focusings on their phone without eye contact.

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, car accidents would happen if they are watching their phone

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they are crossing the road.