Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages？
Today's youth has
this
habit that when they spent more time with the same age group they end up getting influenced by them. Linking Words
This
essay will explain how the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
Nowadays, youngsters have a habit of using expensive Linking Words
things
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such
as bikes, cell phones, cars and clothes. Linking Words
While
meeting each other in college, party or any other social gathering they show off very much and their peers get influenced by their behaviours. Linking Words
Hence
they start demanding the same Linking Words
things
in front of their parents or partners. Use synonyms
For instance
, two types of people studying in the same college, but the financial condition of both students is different in that situation if the person with poor financial conditions starts demanding Linking Words
such
highly expensive Linking Words
things
. It is not necessary that both kinds of families Use synonyms
afford
the same Fix the infinitive
to afford
things
. Use synonyms
However
, Parents can make their children understand their situation so that they work hard and try to earn those goods on their own.
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One
of the advantages is that many a time some of our mates behave in a very positive manner and we get highly influenced by that behaviour and try to take Use synonyms
things
optimistically. Use synonyms
For example
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one
of the students got very good bands in IELTS, started the preparation for higher education in his preferred country and earned a very good amount of scholarship. He didn't give up on his dreams, and Use synonyms
this
influenced many of his peers and they Linking Words
also
started taking their careers seriously. If Linking Words
one
person starts thinking in a positive direction Use synonyms
then
he can influence many others.
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To conclude
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one
should always think about the future and Use synonyms
then
take a decision on getting influenced by others. Every person behaves differently in every situation.Linking Words
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