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In the future nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with statement.

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Nowadays,
due to
 proposed technology, access to various types of online references which can give the latest information or novels either through surfing Google or
applications
 is quite easy
while
, in the
last
 decades people had to devote some of their income to buying a newspaper every morning.l strongly support electronic systems for sharing information rather than using papers for making
newspapers
.
To begin
, on one hand, it is undeniable that making printed
newspapers
 considering the required materials and the number workforce is more costly compared to social
applications
for
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 instance, to provide papers which are fundamental material for
newspapers
, numerous trees would be cut yearly which could have an irreparable effect on environmental and ecosystem.
Furthermore
, the number of staff who need to manage the electronic networks is significantly less than the same of it in the transitional version of newspaper offices.
On the other hand
, nowadays a simple device like a mobile phone at any time of day or night wherever we are giving chance to us to connect to the global network and be aware of the
news
 we are interested in,
while
 printed newspaper paper in the good condition can provide the limited data with certain time like the daily
news
.
for instance
due to
 easy access to plenty of social application
such
 as Instagram, Facebook and
such
applications
, any
news
 can share with people worldwide within some minutes without spending any money.
To conclude
, since in the modern world,new technology provides the chance of easy access to the
news
 free of any fee, printed
newspapers
 have less popularity and l do believe that electronic
applications
 are far better than paper-based
newspapers
.
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