The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The pie chart illustrates Anthropology students’ job positions after graduating from the university
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the other diagram represents their total salaries based on the sectors after five years of graduating.
Overall
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, more than 50 per cent of anthropologists are getting full-time jobs and,
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, the percentage of unknown professions and full-time postgraduates are identical.
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, after working a couple of times, they are more likely to achieve salaries with the value of $100.000 on any type of employment. As it is presented in the graph, anthropology graduates have the lowest rate of doing a part-time job
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studying for a master's degree. Meanwhile, around 15 per cent of bachelors choose to work part-time, which is the second most common destination for them. It
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shows that about 12 out of 10 people are not working after they finish their degree.
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many employers have the same rate of salary, most graduates are working in the government sector.
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, whether the rate is above $75,000, they are more interested in becoming freelance consultants, and they are more likely to choose private companies with a value below $75,000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • part-time work
  • full-time work
  • postgraduate study
  • unemployment
  • career trends
  • employment opportunities
  • flexibility
  • specialization
  • competitive job market
  • salary
  • earning potential
  • private sector
  • government sector
  • freelance work
  • public policy
  • cultural preservation
  • consulting
  • corporate anthropology
  • expertise
  • accrued
  • distribution
  • sector
  • trend
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