There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is widely

belived

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believed

that a

big

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number of people wish to live in big

cities

. In my opinion, I think there are

the

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advantages and disadvantages of living in big

cities

because of reasons and

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. On the one hand, the advantages are that citizens will have

exprience

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experience

experienced

a more modern life with many new and interesting things than country habitants.

Firstly

,

work

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environment in

cities

is more modern and active than

small

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in small

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province

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provinces

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. Labours in big

cities

can have many choice jobs and

workplace

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workplaces

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because

needs

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the needs

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of companies’s human

resource

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resources

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are various and continuos

everyday

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.

Secondly

, people living in big

cities

will

been

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received

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comfortable

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shopping, good

edutioncation

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education

and

heathcare

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healthcare

service

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services

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.

For instance

, there are many hospitals and

heathcare

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healthcare

centers with good doctors near living areas.

On the other hand

, there are disadvantages that aren’t as everyone

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.

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first,

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in big

cities

for anything is more expensive than in countries.

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, It is difficult to own a house or you have to save money about at least two

millions

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Vietnam Dong to buy an old apartment 50 metres

.

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The second disadvantage, there are results from modern life.

Inlustrations

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Illustrations

to these are pollution of water, air and

noisy

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because there

are

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is

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traffic

jam

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by

crown

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the crown

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and resources of water and

electric

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electricity

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are overused. Especially, there

has

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is

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a disease called city disease named stress.

That is

because of

busy

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the busy

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and fast

livestyle

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lifestyle

.

For example

,

according to

a channel of Voice of Vietnam’s program, almost everybody in

cities

have

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got

this

differently at soft or heavy level. In conclusion, it is commonly thought that living in big

cities

is a wish for a

big

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number of

individials

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individuals

.

With

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my

upon

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opinion, I believe that living in big

cities

have

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has

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both

the

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advantages and disadvantages.