Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and given your own opinion.

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should be motivated to compete with each other, whilst others argue that those who are educated about cooperation become more beneficial citizens.

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helps youngsters excel in learning, I am of the opinion that cooperation is a more rewarding trait

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and should be inculcated in every child. Those who state that

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should develop

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base their opinion on

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analysis that by competing, boys and girls strive to learn more.

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to say that a good student, who generally gets first position in a class, will always try to maintain his position and will work harder so as to compete with his other fellow competitors. In

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way, he will exert extra effort at home so that he is not beaten in the

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, many parents in developing countries want their

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to compete with others and get more marks so that their boy or girl gets admission to medical college where the margin of passing or failing is a fraction of a per cent.

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trait of learning can be achieved more successfully if we teach our

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to help each other. Even though there is a majority of those who favour

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approach that

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should be taught to compete to learn and become successful, I agree with others who advocate cooperation because

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imbues a sense of sharing and teamwork in teenagers.

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means that when students help each other

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their homework or assignments, all of them not only get knowledge but

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develop the capabilities of assisting and contributing, which help them when they enter practical life.

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, in Switzerland, many schools require their students to do group assignments, which practice has resulted in those students

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helping their friends when they enter practical life. In conclusion,

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the sense of

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is an important tool for learning, I believe that those

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who are required to help each other, not only learn well but

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become more productive youngsters.