You recently bought an electronic device for your home. Your friend wants to buy the same device and has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - Describe the device - Explain why you bought it -Say whether or not your friend should buy it and why

Dear Lakhy Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant spirit. How is everything going and what about your studies? The purpose of inscribing

this

missive is to give you

suggestion

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about my recent purchase of an electronic

vaccum

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vacuum

they

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i

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ordered from

amazon

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Amazon

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last

week. It is of ABC company with

with

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battery capacity to work for 20 hours. I must say that

i

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am fully satisfied with its functions and

i

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can say that

i

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had

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have

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spent money on

a

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the

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right device. It works like a robot to clean the area;

basically

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i

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set a specific area in its settings to clean the dust particles. It needs to get charged when

battery

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the battery

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gets down. Actually,

i

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was in dire need of someone to do my domestic cleaning but as

i

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was unable to find someone, so

i

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bought it. It made my work easier and helps me like a human being in keeping my home spic and span. As you asked for my advice,

i

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can say that there is no better deal than buying

this

device online. I can

also

share a gift voucher that

i

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received from the company for my

further

purchase with

same

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the same

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firm. Take care Your loving Preet