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News channels only give good news on publications. Do you agree or disagree

#news #channels #publications
It is important to be aware of things happening around us and in
this
 world. One of the ways in which we can avail
this
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 is through the
news
 channels. There is a belief that we get to see only the good
information
on
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 publications. I completely disagree with
this
 belief and will support my view with examples.
Firstly
, publishing bulletins which are ethical or moral in nature will only give false hopes to
people
.
As a result
, they would be turning a blind eye towards the things they should be concerned about.
For instance
, publications hiding the fact that a country is going through inflation would stop the readers from being prepared.
This
 can lead to chaos and confusion among them.
Secondly
,
this
 technique itself is harmful to those
news
 channels as publishing only a single type of
news
 can lead to boredom and
thus
people
 might stop buying the publications.
For example
, it is a good practice to publish
information
 from each and every
sect's
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 of society be it good or bad.
This
 generates clicks and increases revenue and popularity as
people
 get to read from an array of published
information
. In conclusion,
although
 publishing only
the
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good
information
 sounds righteous in nature. I completely disagree with
this
 belief as
this
 can prove to be a huge disadvantage to
the
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journalism companies.
Instead
, companies should focus on providing
news
 which
are
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 both good and bad.
This
 would make
people
 more aware, and it would turn out to be beneficial for the
news
 company.
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