In the past, buildings ofien reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar.What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

Buildings
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housings
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used to be the source of cultural and economical variety but in today's world, all skyscrapers look the same which results in the generation of
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kind of
cities
.There are many reasons behind
this
but
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completlely
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completely
agree that
buildings
should be constructed
according to
the
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modern architecture. To start with, there are several reasons
behindd
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behind
the construction of
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buildings
. First of all,
due to
rapid growth in the world's population, it has become so evident for the major
cities
to build tall skyscrapers to
accomodate
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accommodate
the people. Bigger companies
also
need
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buildings
to operate
due to
less availability of space in the bigger
cities
.
That is
why, to cope
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with the increasing population management,
cities
need to rely on modern
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designs
of
buildings
which take very less time to get built.
Secondly
, nobody can predict
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natural
desasters
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disasters
such
as earth quacks and floods etcetera. To provide more security,
buildings
are being built based on
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advanced
architechtical
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architectural
techniques.
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