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Some people think that best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Other however believe that there are other alternatives ways of reducing crime. Discuss your opinion?

#people #crime #prison #sentences #alternatives
These two pie charts display
proportions
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the proportions
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 of sources from which people receive their news in two countries - Germany and Nigeria. It's visible that in Germany, newspapers still remain the dominant source of news with TV following them up,
while
 in Nigeria the primary sources are TV and radio. It
also
 should be noted that almost no one accesses their news via
internet
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 which is probably caused by the
overall
 lack of
net
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 coverage in African countries. The fact that a lot of
population
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the population
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 still uses newspapers in the modern days in Germany is
also
 surprising, as most of the country already has access to TV or
internet
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the internet
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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