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Nowadays, people spend a lot in celebrating occasions. Do you think it is a good or bad thing? Give your opinion.

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Occasions are a special way to express your love and affection towards another individual. At times
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 feels happy so celebrating is considered a gesture of showing joy by making it a big deal.
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, with joy comes responsibility which
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 tends to forget in order to please
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.
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, individuals tend to spend a lot more on small victories in their work life or in their personal life.
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,
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 spends millions of dollars on an event to please the community and to maintain its status in
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. By doing
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 they are not benefiting anyone rather than spending money on the occasion which could be invested in useful things like houses, education or food.
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, it is beneficial to show your happiness in the form of a celebration as a person works hard and must reward themselves with a celebration.
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, a small promotion in the office turns out to be a grand party at a fancy place
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 an individual can host a small get-together at their house where they are not spending too much and enjoying
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 too.
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, excess of everything is harmful if you are celebrating your win one should make sure it's within your budget just by pleasing
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 and spending endlessly on an event won't let you sustain in the long term
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, a person should spend wisely in my opinion.
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