The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The pie charts illustrate the advantages and disadvantages of Bowen island depending on the survey the visitors have done.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the most common disadvantage is the high cost of living
while
the most common advantage is the people who live there. First of all,
according to
the visitors' opinion, the most popular disadvantage is spending
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reached 50%. Another disadvantage of the island is the entertainment as it stood at 25%.
According to
the weather and food quality, they were slightly similar to each other as they reached 15% and 10%, respectively. Second of all, the residents who live there were at the top of the most common advantages reaching 42%. Interestingly, the
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Bowen island was lower than the
percentage
of people by 7%. The
percentage
of the culture was exactly 12% which was slightly higher than the good accommodation. Good accommodation followed good accommodation by getting the least
percentage
among the other advantages which was 11%.
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