The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in the Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the United Kingdom. The main dealing ways for dangerous
garbage
are the following five ways, Recycling,
Incineration
, Underground, Chemical treatment, and Dumping at sea. Different countries have different main ways, I will illustrate the following. In the Republic of Korea, they use Recycling, Underground, and
Incineration
to deal with dangerous waste products. The most used method is recycling, there are 69% of
garbage
processed in
this
way. The second one is Underground, which processed 22% of
garbage
.
Incineration
, a way of destroying
garbage
by fire, has minimal use,
according to
9%. Sweden, same like Korea,
uses
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use
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Recycling, Underground and
Incineration
to process dangerous
garbage
. But the most used method is Underground, 55% of dangerous products are processed in
this
method. Recycling and
Incineration
take part in 25% and 20% separately. The United Kingdom is most different, It has 82% of
garbage
is
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apply
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dealt with Underground. 8% of
garbage
is processed by Chemical treatment. And 8% of
garbage
dumping at sea.
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