You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing regarding the feedback about the cookery
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held
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month in the main town hall building.
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, our experience was extremely good and my all friends enjoyed it a lot on a different occasion when experts showed us background history and useful techniques to cook delicious food. After the
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, I invited lots of relatives to taste my new dishes e.g biryani, pulao and mutton rice and provide insightful feedback. Now, I already cook hundreds of different foods and
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found various cooking channels on Youtube to help
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how to cook in the proper way but not as experts taught in the
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. I would like to suggest you offer us another cookery
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, particularly for those who are interested in new kinds of dishes related to other countries.
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, it will
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increase our current food menu and help us to introduce new food to local people. Once again thanks for the fantastic
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! Kind Regards, Khawar
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