You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words.

#cookery #course #school #feedback #director #ve #offer

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing regarding the feedback about the cookery

course

held

last

month in the main town hall building.

Overall

, our experience was extremely good and my all friends enjoyed it a lot on a different occasion when experts showed us background history and useful techniques to cook delicious food. After the

course

, I invited lots of relatives to taste my new dishes e.g biryani, pulao and mutton rice and provide insightful feedback. Now, I already cook hundreds of different foods and

Change the capitalization

show examples

found various cooking channels on Youtube to help

beginner

Fix the agreement mistake

beginners

show examples

how to cook in the proper way but not as experts taught in the

course

. I would like to suggest you offer us another cookery

course

, particularly for those who are interested in new kinds of dishes related to other countries.

Thus

, it will

also

increase our current food menu and help us to introduce new food to local people. Once again thanks for the fantastic

course

! Kind Regards, Khawar

Submitted by khawar512 on Tue Feb 14 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

166 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to work at a job you enjoy than to make a lot of money. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.
In recent years, there has been a significant rise in the number of people advocating for the importance of job satisfaction over financial remuneration. While this trend presents both advantages and disadvantages, I believe that the merits outweigh the demerits. In this essay, I will delve into the relevant aspects of this debate, providing factual justifications for my stance.
8
band
A friend has invited you to a birthday party, but you will be able to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the invitation Explain why you won’t be able to attend Suggest another time to see your friend.
I just received your invitation letter to your birthday party. Thank you for inviting me. Turning 40 years old is an important milestone in life. Therefore, I am incredibly happy that you want me to celebrate this special occasion with you.
7
band
Computer is becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computer use in education and give your own opinion.
In the contemporary world, scientific innovations have become an indispensable part of people's lives. However, among other useful inventions, computers are the most commendable and incredible of all, as they have played an essential role in all fields of life, especially, in education. This essay will analyze the benefits and drawbacks of using technical computers in education and qualification till my conclusion is reached.
6
band
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
There are several people that believes, the most important goal for government should be the economic progress. However, other progresses are equally important for government to focus on, stated by few citizens. If the economic achievements are good this will lead to the good progress in every fields. However, to improve economic field, government needs to be more attentive regarding some academic and environmental fields. Therefore, in my opinion, both statements are logical. This essay will elaborate on my points of view with some relevant examples.
5.5
band
Some people think that it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness, rather than funding the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most severe problems that governments concern is enhancing citizen’s health conditions to the largest extent. Some hold that public money should be evaluated significantly and spent on raising an awareness to own healthy life conditions so as to prevent illness before catching it while other people deem that this budget should be paid for patients’ treatment costs. I partially agree with both viewpoints as this essay will demonstrate.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to work at a job you enjoy than to make a lot of money. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

A friend has invited you to a birthday party, but you will be able to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the invitation Explain why you won’t be able to attend Suggest another time to see your friend.

Computer is becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computer use in education and give your own opinion.

Some people think that it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness, rather than funding the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?