some people think that the best way to reduce the time spend travelling to work its to replace park and garden close to the city center with appartment building for commuters but other disagree. Discussed both the view and give your opinion.

It is fact that travelling consumed lots of

time

to

work

. Many

people

believe that replacing

parks

and

gardens

with residential accommodation near the city centre

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saves

time

to

work

.

However

, others think that

parks

and

gardens

are more fruitful rather than apartment buildings. Before arriving on my opinion both the views will be discussed

further

. Considering the former view is that individuals think that

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if the residential apartments will be made near workplaces

instead

of

parks

and

gardens

, which is the best way to save

time

and money for travelling. That means that when there will no long distance between home and office, it would be easy to reach on

time

the office

as well as

there will be no need for a vehicle for

work

.

For instance

, If there is a Walking distance between home and

work

,

then

people

avoid using cars or bikes.

Furthermore

, When

parks

and

gardens

are replaced with residential areas, that would reduce vehicles, and

as a result

, pollution would be decreased in future.

For Example

,

people

chose to go for a walk rather than

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a car or bike for

work

. Examining the letter opinion, some

people

counter claim the mentioned view and they argue that it will affect on our environment, considerably park and garden are imperative to maintain the suitable atmosphere. It is true that

gardens

and

parks

give fresh air to breathe. Another reason is that it reduces the shelter of birds.

Therefore

, Birds will vanish in future and which affect the ecosystem. To illustrate, the number of trees that will be cut in the park and garden for apartments, destroy birds' shelter

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living.

Finally

, I disagree with

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given statement and the reason that replacing

parks

and

gardens

with apartments is affecting human, bird and animal life. so that it is not the best way to deal with

time

for

work

with reduced species and 02. Because of

this

, pollution would be rose in the future

time

and it affect human life.

To conclude

,

although

replacing the garden and park with an apartment reduces

time

and money, it would increase pollution and affect the

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, so

this

is not the best option to save

time

for

work

.