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Some people think that uniforms in schools are unnecessary and should be banned. T o what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #uniforms #schools
Nowadays in lots of schools is compulsory to wear a uniform, but not everybody is thrilled to do so and there are even people who are proposing to abandon
this
 habit. In my
opinion
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this
 is a complex dilemma that has its own pros and cons,
however
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 I believe that everyone should be able to dress freely.
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, I think that choosing what you wear is one of the best ways to express yourself. Being forced to use clothes that do not
respresent
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represent
 you can make you feel uncomfortable,
on the other
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 if there are
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 bounds on how you can go to school you are able to show your true self to others and develop your creativity. By choosing your outfit every day you can achieve a new personal style and
secondly
 even influence others. On second hand I
also
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 that the school
envoiroment
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environment
 itself could benefit from a
differnt
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different
 range of
colors
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colours
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 and
style
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styles
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 becoming a more
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joyful
 place, where you
able
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 to be anybody you want.
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view
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 I can see why some people fight for the status quo and still want kids to wear uniforms,
due to
 avoid discrimination based on wealth it is much easier to force kids to wear the same thing.
However
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 I perceive
this
 enforcement as
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a limit
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 to freedom and as every
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 on
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 that does not damage others
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has to be removed. In conclusion, I not only
suppert
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support
 the uniform's abolition but I
also
 encourage a more free way to dress to school, always without exceeding some
guidilines
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guidelines
.
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