Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Poor people are found in different countries and each country has different ways of tackling poverty.In my

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the world is financially crippled

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so many reasons ,one of which is the lack of

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system.In my country where income is below minimum wage,the vast majority are unable to afford a good meal and talk more about

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, parents are unable to cater for their children’s Tuition

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of them hawking during school hours.

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, unemployment is on the high side which has turned so many into beggars, arm robbers and practising fraudulent activities just to make ends meet.

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, as a graduate with a bachelor's degree, I have been unable to secure a job since I graduated.

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just to cater for my needs I took up a menial job which still doesn’t cover my entire expenses. To reverse

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, the Government should provide a scheme for free

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that will encourage so many to be on the path of fulfilling their career.

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,the provision of numerous empowerment programs will help enlighten both young and old and

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support their businesses .

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, putting in place relevant infrastructures.

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, Hospitals, schools, and empowerment structures. All of these will

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contribute to employment and gradually put an end to the ratio of poor people in society. In conclusion, world poverty can be greatly managed when the government makes provision for free

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, empowerment programs and infrastructures will be the solution to help the less privileged.

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Health services are a basic necessity. However, private companies have made them quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages?

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'People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities.' To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction? * Social media networks = messaging and information exchange systems such as Facebook and Twitter.

Too much emphasis to given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?