Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think students should spend time on important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is claimed by some that

students

should become aware of

coockery

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cookery

lessons,

while

others believe

students

should engage in crucial

subjects

.

Although

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knowledge

in

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cooking and

food

can benefit them in the long run, l argue that important

subjects

yield valuable results,

such

as job and cognitive abilities later on. These days, it has been common for

students

to know

science

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the science

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of

food

and prepare different meals. The main reason is

being

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harmful additives which are common in everyday foods.

For example

, some restaurants and cafes are offering fast and contaminated foods that

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a

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negative consequences for

the

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public health, particularly in urban

environment

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.

Therefore

, many

students

are allocating most of their time

for

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learning

food

content and its preparation. As long as they

familirise

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familiarise

familiarize

themselves with

food

additives and

preparing

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, they can avoid being the victim

from

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potential risks of harmful foods, attributing to the development in their

further

education without suffering illness.

However

, there are some significant

subjects

that

students

have to be familiar

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their studies rather than engaging in other activities. The core reason is that being

master

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in

major

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subject could bring job opportunities with high

salary

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, resulting in better living in the future. Because

,

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thise

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those

these

who are well educated can gain experience quickly and benefit from

job

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. Another benefit of studying is developing a sense of cognitive development. Important

subjects

are a source of developing

mind

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, fostering their critical thinking and problem-solving skills, which means if

students

study

such

subjects

, it will ease future

diffuculties

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difficulties

in their workplace. In conclusion, even though cooking and

food

contents

is

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important to learn, l advocate that main

subjects

are far more

usefull

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useful

for their

further

life.