Some people agree with spending lots of money on a large wedding , while others think it’s a waste of money. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays wedding is more of a social status. It is often argued that shelling out a huge chunk of saving for a wedding is useless,

while

other groups of people are against

this

. I totally agree with the former and believe that extra

money

could be used in a better way. The meaning of a wedding has changed over the years, Earlier, the wedding was believed to be enmeshing of two souls and setting up a simple marriage, but now the community want to flex their

money

power by flushing out a huge pile of cash and showing their social status.

For instance

, some

while

ago, I went to the marriage of one of my friend's brothers. They had booked

this

huge banquet for the wedding with every possible content dish for dinner.

Thus

, I don't believe spending big is equivalent to high status among the known group of people.

Instead

of spending big in a marriage, the extra

money

which could be saved by restricting expenditure on unimportant things could be put to better use by giving to the newlywed couple.

As a result

this

could help them financially.

Further

, with

this

money

they could buy a house or open up a business in future. Recently, one of my cousin's parents set up a simple wedding and gave them some

money

as a wedding present. Eventually,

this

proved to be beneficial for them as they invested that

money

to open up a side business which turned out to be a huge success.

To conclude

, some communities believe spending heftily on a wedding is nothing but a waste of wealth,

while

others oppose

this

. But, I think people should give it a second thought before shedding out their life savings.

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Some people agree with spending lots of money on a large wedding , while others think it’s a waste of money. What is your opinion?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them?

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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