You recently attended a job interview, but you have not received any feedback yet. Write a letter to the Human Resources manager. In your letter: – Introduce yourself and mention the position you applied for – Explain why you believe the interview went well – Request an update on the result and explain why you need it promptly. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Mr. Andersen. My name is Tomás Alcaide, and I am writing to you regarding the interview we had

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for the Head Coach position that your company advertised on their website. I remember that when we were finishing, you told me I would have news from you by yesterday.

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, I am contacting you because I had a good feeling after our meeting, basically

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the great comments you and your team made about my educational background and previous experience.

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, to the

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management that I demonstrated during the practical part of your evaluation. Having these points in consideration, I would appreciate it if you could give me an update on my application regarding the several job meetings that I have scheduled for the next weekend. Hoping to have news from you in the next days and thanking you in advance for your prompt response. Yours sincerely.

tom.alcaidesa

Aug 4, 2025

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Make sure to clarify your points, perhaps by giving more reasons for your good feeling after the interview.

coherence and cohesion

Try to connect your ideas more clearly. For example, you can use linking words to make your message smoother.

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You have a clear introduction that includes your name and the position applied for.

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Your letter has a polite tone, which is very important in formal communication.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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