Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is true that social media are

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having

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certain effects on people and their lives. From my perspective, I completely agree with the view that new communication technology is having some detrimental effects on people’s relationships.

To begin

with, it is undeniable that chatting on the

Internet

is far more convenient than

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meeting

face-to-face. They just need a computer or a mobile phone and

then

they could talk about everything together right at their

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home

.

However

,

this

also

leads to many problems. As

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they

are just at

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home and chatting on the

Internet

, they will become reluctant to go outside and meet their

friend

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friends

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face-to-face. They may not feel relaxed and confident

while

meeting friends and

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could even

leads

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to some psychological problems

such

as depression….

Moreover

, the

Internet

is not completely safe for people, especially teenagers. The more time they spend on the

Internet

, the more likely they could be taken in by someone on the

Internet

. As they only talk together through

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chat

rooms,

video

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calls, they could be easily taken in by many bad guys with bad purposes In conclusion, I completely

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view that modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social

relationship

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relationships

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because they could be