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Some people think that robots are very important for human’s future development. Others, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effect on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Never have the topics concerning technology failed to attract the public’s attention.
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, when it comes to whether
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 are beneficial or detrimental to human society,
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 hold divergent views. From my perspective, I believe that even though
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 can be beneficial to human future development, they will undoubtedly exert some negative repercussions on society. On the one hand,
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 have greatly revolutionized
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’s lives in many aspects.
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 with, it is not rare to see a great many
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 used for scientific research. Since they are equipped with a metal shell and advanced technology, they can be utilized to perform some dangerous and arduous tasks, which is conducive to ensuring the researchers’ security and promoting the research progress. A typical example is that many
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 are occupied exploring the ocean trench.
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,
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 are commonly used in some companies as they can enhance work efficiency to a large extent,
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 generating more economic value. The efficiency of traditional labour is limited,
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 the introduction of
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 can break through the limitation of manual labour. In factories,
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 are qualified for some competitive tasks, which will not only reduce possible errors but speed up the production process.
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, no matter how great convenience they have brought to
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, the drawbacks of the usage of
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 should not be underestimated. Humans' overreliance on
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 will contribute to poor creativity, flexibility and self-motivation. As a growing number of
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 tend to make products with the help of
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, they will be loath to think independently and engage in making handicrafts by themselves. In that case, there will be a foreseeable decrease in humans’ originality and manual dexterity.
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,
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 are inclined to undermine social stability. They have taken the places of many average
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 who were formerly employed in basic positions, which will bring about unemployment issues. Under
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 circumstances, those individuals are likely to be underrated, underappreciated and underprivileged by the public, which can lead them to take revenge on the public community to express their resentment and dissatisfaction. In conclusion, the usage of
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 will not merely bring some merits or demerits to society. For some aspects, it will be a blessing, but for others, it will be a nightmare.
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